What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? Why is this room more important to you than any other room? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion
Before giving my opinion about rooms I would like to mention traditional home of Mongolians. Before Mongolians living in apartment and houses, our ancestry used to live in yurt (some people still live in yurt). The yurt made of woods and wool and especially made for nomads because of its structure and light weight. However, yurt have only one room. Therefore, there are no choice to choose which room is important. This may sound disadvantage but its becomes advantages for some reason because people used to live happily together in one room. For this reason, I consider living room where all family member gather together is the most important room in a house. I have thousands of reason why living room is special for me, but I would like to mention three important considerations.
First of all, as I mentioned earlier happy family or healthy family always connects with all family members. Hence, gathering together is the foundation of happiness. For example, in own room, I only feel my own happiness but in together I feel happiness by others happiness.
Secondly, it is the warmest place of my house. I live in house designed only one resourse of fire in the middle of entire house. This means other rooms are not warmer than main living room. Hence, the living room becomes the most comfortable room in winter.
Last but not least, in my house living room is the only room that has a TV. Spending time on TV is one of the most relaxing moment after hard day. I think watching TV in living room after all family member slept, is much better than some kind of meditation. For example, when I was in abroad for three months, due to overloaded work, I stressed a lot but comparing to the time when I was at my home country the work pressure was low. Soon, I released that I was stressed due to lack of “watching TV at home” meditation.
In sum, in my opinion, we all say that we miss home, but home is not the thing we miss, we miss living room and living room related meditation, happiness and warmness. Henceforth, whenever I have got asked by what do you consider to be the most important room in house, I would definitely say that living room for above reasons
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, after all, for example, i feel, i think, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62051282051 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5423965874 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484615384615 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3192614172 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9090909091 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323260498898 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111261797406 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113246211686 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185502121081 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927522312299 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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