What is the most important animal in your country?
Frankly, there are many different types of animals in my country and each animal has its unique importance for the country. From my point of view, camel is the most significant animal in Iran because it has a lot of advantages for both people and economy. In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First and foremost, people use camel milk and it is the main ingredient of our diets. According to the latest researches which were published in well-known journals, camel milk has essential nutrients for growth and people who drink it regularly are less prone to various ailments. In addition, we use camel meat because it is very tasty and delicious. It contains a huge amount of fatty acids, proteins, necessary minerals and so forth.
In the second place, most areas of my country are arid and semi-arid regions and people use camel for carry goods and transportation. They move from deserts to regions with milder climate by camel because it can tolerate the harsh conditions of deserts. It consumes less food and water and carry more cargo. Furthermore, it can produce more milk and meat in comparison to sheep, goat, cow and other animals. People use the skin of animal and produce leather to make various things like bags, shoes, wallet and so forth.
Finally, it is important to bear in mind that scientists and researcher use camel in laboratories for a different purpose. They can manipulate the genome of the animal to produce recombinant proteins such as hormones, growth factors, etc. Since it does not need special requirements for growth, researchers prefer to use it in their experiments.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that camel is the most important animal in my country because of various reasons like food production, transportation and scientific researches.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, frankly, furthermore, if, second, so, well, in addition, such as, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04530744337 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80428881836 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556634304207 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.32341951 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4375 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173688645361 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552136790534 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802473639541 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116510540123 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870718630964 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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