Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sport or other dangerous activities?
Since immemorial times, humans have been attracted by practicing dangerous activities. Nowadays, these practices have increased their popularity especially among young people. Although, there are many reasons to explain this behavior, I my view the foremost factors are social, physical and medical issues.
Firstly, Social factors. Human beings are a sociable specie, we need to live in communities and interact with other people. However, many people have difficulties to make friends so they try to do dangerous performances in order to catch more attention. For instance, a huge number of in-house accident occur when teenager are alone and bored at home.
Secondly, Physical factors. Many people have addiction to different drugs such as Tabaco, alcohol o cocaine. There are some extreme performers that are addicted to adrenaline, which is a chemical substance delivered by our brain when we feel deep emotions such as fear. For example, the bungee jumping or rafting produce huge amount of adrenaline.
Finally, medical issues. There are a wide range of reason for practicing risky activities, but I think that a few mental illness could explain this behavior. This is because humans have natural instincts, which are very important to survive, moreover, instinct like fear keep us far and safe. In this train of thinking, it is completely unnatural to perform dangerous activities, because doing it we are contradicting our own instinct.
In summary, dangerous activities can be done for different motivations such as social, addictions or mental illness. However, they all have something in common that is putting our live in danger.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 257.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40856031128 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80382528101 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661478599222 0.524837075471 126% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4606690991 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7647058824 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17409517367 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468374977242 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560943135949 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929185340894 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390333760722 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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