Why go to museum?
I strongly believe that the museum is the most important part of the city and I definitely encourage anyone to visit the famous museum in any new country he visits. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the paragraph below.
First of all, museums are educational. We can learn and discover a lot about the country by just visiting the historical places including museums and amphitheaters. Museums offers many interesting things such as potteries and manuscripts and from theses samples we can learn a lot of the era that they belong to. I believe that these kind of staff are very valuable to our modern times because we can take a glimpse of the past. For example, ten years ago when I was in Syria, I used to visit the national museum many times because every time I went, I was able to learn something new about the cultures that were there thousands years ago. This example demonstrates how important it is to visit the museum in the city.
Secondly, by visiting the museum we can have such valuable memories that we can not get by reading books or watching TV. Personally I feel amazed when I am between ancient fossils that are three thousands years ago. I try to take pictures as much as I can so I will be able to look at them anytime I want in the future. Drawing from my personal experience, when I went with my family to Cairo in short trip a couple of years ago, I took a lot of pictures of the famous Pyramids that are there and nowadays, I try to show these pictures to my son and my friends who visit me. Moreover,I try to tell them the stories that I learnt when I was there. Without these pictures, it would be so hard to believe how incredible these Pyramids are.
To sum up, the museum is very important place in the city that everyone should visit first. This is because museums are educational, cultural and entertaining as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i feel, in short, kind of, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42774566474 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50070657261 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508670520231 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6817881129 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136400257346 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593020661509 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590562651576 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106676189198 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483885821786 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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