the widespread use of internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today's world
Before tendering my opinion, I guess it is crucial to take quick glance on this argument on both sides. Many people suggest that Internet access influence people’s life in much better way. Others believe that the unlimited access to Internet impact our life in unhealthy way. In my perspective I concur with first group of people who they believe in that information's availability affect people life style because of unlimited access to Internet changes people’s life in properly way because of numerous reasons why I subscribe to a distinct attitude elaborating cogently in the subsequent paragraphs.
The first reason coming to my mind consolidating my standpoint is explain the distribution of technology all around the world make people using Internet, social media in any time they prefer. Nowadays, people having plethora of websites that allowed them to get a lot of information and that impact their lives positively. For instance, one of my alumni’s friend she has a presentation and she couldn't find one. Moreover, she was looking for a case to present and she got one from a research website also that helped her by getting high scores and graduate.
Second reason I need to give it some attention is that by using Internet or any kind of technology in this era that will help people raise their skills, experiences and talents as well. Furthermore, many studies claimed that if people in this century trying to achieve their goals that will affect their intelligence level and will build their fundamental knowledge as well. And that will make the life better especially for specific majority of people who’s trying to find a solution for achieving their goals.
Additionally, in these days we have the most convenient ways to improve our society by getting highly educational level, raising our industry, and working on country’s economical level also. For example, with the infinity kind of technology many societies and countries developed their future and raise their economical level to compete other strong countries. In contrast to poor countries which they don’t have accessibility to any type of technology, they still considered non educational enough to compete other countries.
To put it in a brief, I strongly agree that a lot of accessibility to different kind of websites and pages on-line impact people’s life in properly ways. Actually, this century considered full of thrives and prosperities because of this technology. In a nutshell, in fact, there are multiplicities of other factors supplementing the aforementioned statements, which could be alluded here, but are not embraced due to the dearth of time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 361, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'informations'' or 'information's'?
Suggestion: informations'; information's
...roup of people who they believe in that informations availability affect people life style b...
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Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'explained'.
Suggestion: explained
... my mind consolidating my standpoint is explain the distribution of technology all arou...
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Line 2, column 399, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...s friend she has a presentation and she couldnt find one. Moreover, she was looking for...
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Line 6, column 191, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...king on country's economical level also. For example, with the infinity kind of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, so, still, well, for example, for instance, i guess, in contrast, in fact, kind of, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2258.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28805620609 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01175512875 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545667447307 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 713.7 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0313123925 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.823529412 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1176470588 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.82352941176 5.45110844103 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202300958698 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674170273037 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579266771714 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107391101787 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658132166324 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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