Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.

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Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.

Some people believe doing similar tasks make workers more please than they do diversity of tasks while some others disagree. As far as I am concerned, I side with former because not only do workers have much concentration when they do similar tasks, but also they can decrease their work time with doing similar deeds. In addition, the same works expand workers' efficiency.
First, concentration plays a crucial role to do every work. In fact, if workers have focused on their tasks, they will perform that easily. Moreover, similar tasks increase workers' concentration. For example, a time when my father was building a house, he assigned each worker special task, and he tried not to change the type of their tasks. Consequently, workers had an enough concentration on their own deeds and they did their work easily and happily. Thus, the concentration made workers satisfy from their tasks.
Second, time efficient affects the result of each project. Indeed, decreasing time of work, workers will be more satisfied. Put differently, workers enjoy with doing their tasks quickly and fast. Furthermore, the similar works decrease time which works have to do them. Thus, less variation of tasks brings up more happiness of workers. For instance, my uncle who works in a factory with a same machine, usually tell us that he attempts to finish his tasks as soon as possible for going to his home and family. Due to this fact, the similar task helps him to complete his work quickly. Hence, workers will be more content if they accomplish his task in less period of time.
Lastly, creativity enhances the performance of tasks. Although various tasks change mood of workers, the same ones stimulate innovation of them. In fact, this creativity motivates workers to do their best. In other words, high efficiency augments workers' passion and satisfaction. As an illustration, I have worked in an institution. Moreover, I just have searched and collected information since I was hired there. To be more specific, I changed the way of doing my task creatively. Now, I am able to accomplish my task in a comfortable way. Consequently, innovation boosts my happiness from work.
In conclusion, the same tasks make workers much satisfied that they do multiple tasks. Due to this fact, similar tasks increase workers' concentration, and it decreases time of work. Additionally, workers have much innovation with the same tasks.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, moreover, second, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2024.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08542713568 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78119707959 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494974874372 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0684738717 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7931034483 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.724137931 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10344827586 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374780357556 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108002328809 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882438105774 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256033489392 0.150856017488 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886357888565 0.0645574589148 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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