Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is undeniable that types of career are a popular topic, which has caused widespread debate because it considerably affects people in their every day's lives. Depending on personal experience and emotional concerns, people differ in their attitude toward this issue. Some people maintain the idea that workers who have similar tasks all day are more satisfied. Others disagree. In my opinion, workers who do similar tasks all day are more satisfied and following lines further elaborate on this perspective.
First, workers with similar tasks specialize in on specific task. Concentrating on one task can improve the quality of that job considerably. After a while, the worker knows all aspects of that particular job, and, as a result, he does the tasks perfectly and with minimum mistake. For example, I was a marketing assistant for two years, at the beginning it took two month to learn the jab and during that time, I made some mistakes such as making contract at an unprofitable price for sailing a computer. However, when I got used to the job I became master and I did not make any mistake anymore. As you can see, doing similar task can eventuate in high quality of doing the job, which directly increases worker's satisfaction.
In addition to specialization of workers in one task, they have less stress. Evidently, if you do not know what will happen in the next step, you will be nervous. Of course, it depends on personality type, but I think most people are confident when they are aware of following events. This fact let them be more relaxed and have less stress not only in duration of their work but also in their entire life. Since they know their tasks for tomorrow and following weeks, they can spend their free time purely with their family.
In sum, based on reasons explored above, we can reach the conclusion that similar task is more beneficial for worker and make them more satisfied.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, i think, in addition, of course, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86585365854 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57789850036 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579268292683 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9450742424 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341206067757 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108705930943 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826441331306 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193801252058 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300044886591 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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