You have the opportunity to visit a foregn country for two weeks. Which country would you like to visit? Use spesiifc reasons and details to explain your choice.
Our planet is so huge and diverse, and there are a lot of countries I would like to visit. If I have a chance to visit a foreign country for two weeks, I definitely will choose Greece. There are a few reasons why I feel this way.
First of all, Greece is one of the most ancient country in the world, and has tremendous amount of historical places to look at. Greece consists of a few islands and all of them have their own story. From the time of beginning history classes in school I was told a myriad of stories about gods of ancient Greece by my history teacher, read variety of books, and watched scores of documentary films on the same topic. I always found it very interesting and was fascinated by Greece. To that end, if I have a chance to go to Greece, I will have an opportunity to see all I heard at school in real life.
Secondly, Greece is well known with its famous beaches and warm water in sea. Getting in touch with the nature is a great way to spend time during the vacation. For example, I like swimming and diving. The place where I am living now lacks of sea or ocean nearby. Therefore, the only way for me to dive is a membership in a local diving club, where pool`s bottom imitates sea`s bottom. This way, Greece is a perfect country for me to go to enjoy diving in a real sea environment.
Finally, one of my school teachers lives in Greece now. It would be great to see her after so many years of graduation. To the point, she is the teacher, who fascinated me with this astonishing country by narrating fabulous stories about heroes of ancient Greece in the history class. She went to this country as an archeologist to study ruins of old world, and eventually settled in there. So, traveling to Greece would let me to hug a favorite teacher and have the best guide to explore the country.
To sum it up, I feel that if I have an opportunity to travel to a foreign country, I will go Greece. This is because, Greece is appealing for me from the historical point of view, it is a marvelous place to practice in diving, and I would have a chance to visit the favorite school teacher. All things considered, it seems reasonable to assume that there is no better country to visit for me than Greece.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50398661729 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492857142857 0.524837075471 94% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1921284266 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0454545455 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77272727273 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206404566464 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663767997791 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748359870588 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147693407066 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108658236048 0.0645574589148 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 10.9000537634 73% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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