In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural condition or is there more need for land to be developed for housing and industry?
Upon the above question, different people have different opinions based on their emotions, educations, cultures and so forth. Some people may think that protecting the environment is more important than building factories and developing industry. From my point of view, each option has its unique advantages but I believe that the benefits of using lands for developing industry outweigh the advantages of protecting the environment. In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First and foremost, building new houses and factories will bring countless job opportunities for people. Currently, there are many graduated students who look for appropriate jobs and it is a great chance for them to work and obtain money. In addition, the growth of population in my country is high and people have difficulties finding apartments or houses. In my opinion, if government build new apartments for people, this problem will be eliminated significantly.
In the second place, using lands for developing industry has some positive effects on the economy of my country. For example, new factories can make important products like automobiles, planes or other things so the need for importing these products from foreign countries will be removed.
Finally, it is important to bear in mind that protecting the environment is also important. Many animals live in their natural habitats like forests and destruction of their nests will have serious influences on wildlife. Forests are ideal places for relaxation and trees provide us with clean and fresh air.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that both protecting the environment and using it for developing industry are significant issue but improving the industry and building new houses should be the first priorities based on the reasons which I outlined above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, may, second, so, for example, in addition, in my opinion, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 294.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40476190476 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92601039978 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581632653061 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0045821941 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344027312233 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102424304324 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782365511513 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179818351601 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778074018614 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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