Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Today, by improving technology, Life style has been sophisticated by many aspect of such technology. Communication, transportation, furniture and other thing are hugely changed with this industrial revelation. Therefore, people and special young people should be adapted them and they learn live with accessories properly. I converge on such topic that young people should arrange their plan to them for some reasons three substantial of which elaborated here under.
First, nowadays, in communication part, many accessories such as cellphones, Tablets and laptops have improved continuously .Thus, people must learn how to use it. For instance, some apps or soft wares have professionally aspects and some people make mistake in using them. Accordingly, young people have to learn some useful it and learn how and when to use it .In addition, many accessories or furniture’s have special practical task such as ordinary or professional ways. In recent days, many people are persuaded to use many unnecessary equipment’s .So, perhaps their valuable time are killed by wasted times.
Second, another thing worth mentioning is that, some aspects of life are complex. For example, modern life requires to think broadly. Because modern life has intricate pattern and people should encounter them easily. Not only do People recognize such aspects but also choice the best positive aspect of them. For instance, many young people cannot understand what life style is good or which life style is bad. Although, people must distinguish from their situations.
Last but not least, without any shadow of doubt, modern life has been improved routinely. As it can be easily seen, people can live without any limitation. On the other hand, such freedom that it is prepared by modern life can be hazardous. For example, recently, many teenager have problem about their health and they have overweight for using a various online game, computer games and no physical activities .Therefore, experts are worried about society’s health. They believe that parents should learn life style which is an appreciate them.
To put it in a nutshell, some believe modern life is perfectly good and others suppose that can be dangerous provided that it uses without any awareness. They believe that young people must learn to encounter in a rightful manner. I strongly believe that young people have to learn to distinguish that one of aspect modern life is good for it is mentioned above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
...y, Life style has been sophisticated by many aspect of such technology. Communication, tran...
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Line 1, column 293, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to live'
Suggestion: to live
...e should be adapted them and they learn live with accessories properly. I converge o...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tial of which elaborated here under. First, nowadays, in communication part, ...
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Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s and laptops have improved continuously .Thus, people must learn how to use it. F...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...and laptops have improved continuously .Thus, people must learn how to use it. For i...
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Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...eful it and learn how and when to use it .In addition, many accessories or furnitu...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ul it and learn how and when to use it .In addition, many accessories or furniture...
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Line 3, column 568, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...to use many unnecessary equipment's .So, perhaps their valuable time are kill...
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Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
... use many unnecessary equipment's .So, perhaps their valuable time are killed...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble time are killed by wasted times. Second, another thing worth mentioning i...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'thinking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: thinking
...plex. For example, modern life requires to think broadly. Because modern life has intric...
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Line 5, column 417, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...yle is good or which life style is bad. Although, people must distinguish from their sit...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ust distinguish from their situations. Last but not least, without any sha...
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Line 7, column 415, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...omputer games and no physical activities .Therefore, experts are worried about soc...
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Line 7, column 417, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...puter games and no physical activities .Therefore, experts are worried about society&apos...
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Line 7, column 536, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...arents should learn life style which is an appreciate them. To put it in a nutshell, some...
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Line 9, column 210, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a rightful manner" with adverb for "rightful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...at young people must learn to encounter in a rightful manner. I strongly believe that young people h...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'another thing', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221006564551 0.261695866417 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.164113785558 0.158904122519 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.131291028446 0.0723426182421 181% => Less adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0503282275711 0.0435111971325 116% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0525164113786 0.0277247811725 189% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10284463895 0.128828473217 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0371991247265 0.0370669169778 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81441730699 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0218818380744 0.0208969081088 105% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0415754923414 0.128158765124 32% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0262582056893 0.0158828679856 165% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0153172866521 0.0114777025283 133% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2503.0 1645.83664459 152% => OK
No of words: 393.0 271.125827815 145% => OK
Chars per words: 6.368956743 6.08160592843 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.04852973271 110% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.391857506361 0.374372842146 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272264631043 0.287516216867 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185750636132 0.187439937562 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.139949109415 0.113142543107 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81441730699 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 145.348785872 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508905852417 0.539623497131 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.7638013813 53.8517498576 104% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0529801325 169% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8636363636 21.7502111507 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9127942897 49.3711431718 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.772727273 132.220823453 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8636363636 21.7502111507 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.681818181818 0.878197800319 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 3.39072847682 501% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.090099468 50.5018328374 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.35245901639 1.90840788429 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362617461728 0.549887131256 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102790237785 0.142949733639 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0829203989617 0.0787303798458 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.47475452645 0.631733273073 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141175854478 0.139662658121 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11886884301 0.266732575781 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697866892704 0.103435571967 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.266514006379 0.414875509568 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0511566715919 0.0530846634433 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224895499701 0.40443939384 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058840223129 0.0528353158467 111% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 4.33554083885 323% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.26048565121 94% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 3.49668874172 257% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.62251655629 110% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.2958057395 146% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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