Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
The given statement points that anything is fair in business to earn maximum profit. I strongly disagree with the line. The business selfishness can become dangerous for the humanity and mankind. Emotions and sentiments of people should always taken into account along with business.
The primary reason for my disagreement is the fact that business selfishness affects the quality of life style and personal thinking tendency. For an example, If any pharmaceutical firm decides to boost it's revenue by lowering the quality of certain medicines, a vast population will be affected. The quality of their lives might become more poorer. Apart from that, side effects can also harm an individual. The additional cost may become reason for collapse of whole family. This kind of incidents makes place for personal inclination, everyone will be seeking an opportunity to become selfish and gain as much as they can. As for an another illustration, any engineering firm, public utilities sectors, law and order and you name it, can be considered. All of a sudden, there will be huge fall in humanity and trust among the people. This may lead to riots, fights and even wars. This kind of situation is never economical for any individual, firm, company and country at the end.
Secondly, it can affect the quality of education and services. No one would be willing to study hard to get top position in any well known company or at government after knowing the ill will of the operating firm despite some will choose to give bribe or choose any other way to get the position. The individual will soon become demolishes of his/her own company/firm due to lack of knowledge and skills. Ultimately, any way can lead the company into self-destruction position. Apart from the self destruction, they will contribute to demolish the society.
Conclusively, It is never recommended to ignore quality of human life to earn more money. The more money can also be earned by giving satisfactory services and high quality, which result in rise of the satisfaction level among customers. This can boost number of customers, who contribute to the profit of the company over a long period. So, according to me the way of earning trust of people by giving desired quality of products is the best way to gain profit, the all other self oriented ways should be avoided.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'poorer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: poorer
...The quality of their lives might become more poorer. Apart from that, side effects can also...
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Line 3, column 635, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'an illustration' or 'another illustration'.
Suggestion: an illustration; another illustration
...sh and gain as much as they can. As for an another illustration, any engineering firm, public utilities...
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Line 3, column 953, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ver economical for any individual, firm, company and country at the end. Seco...
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Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended ignoring'.
Suggestion: recommended ignoring
...society. Conclusively, It is never recommended to ignore quality of human life to earn more mone...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'apart from', 'as for', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.259174311927 0.261695866417 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.139908256881 0.158904122519 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0802752293578 0.0723426182421 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0412844036697 0.0435111971325 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0252293577982 0.0277247811725 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119266055046 0.128828473217 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0366972477064 0.0370669169778 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75698307127 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0344036697248 0.0208969081088 165% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.114678899083 0.128158765124 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0481651376147 0.0158828679856 303% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0045871559633 0.0114777025283 40% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2356.0 1645.83664459 143% => OK
No of words: 393.0 271.125827815 145% => OK
Chars per words: 5.99491094148 6.08160592843 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.04852973271 110% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.346055979644 0.374372842146 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.277353689567 0.287516216867 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185750636132 0.187439937562 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119592875318 0.113142543107 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75698307127 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 145.348785872 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562340966921 0.539623497131 104% => OK
Word variations: 64.9346734459 53.8517498576 121% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 13.0529801325 176% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0869565217 21.7502111507 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8831149245 49.3711431718 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.434782609 132.220823453 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0869565217 21.7502111507 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.478260869565 0.878197800319 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.39072847682 118% => OK
Readability: 44.8223254785 50.5018328374 89% => OK
Elegance: 2.01111111111 1.90840788429 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244931842585 0.549887131256 45% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0896188801324 0.142949733639 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0621767893702 0.0787303798458 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.474522936524 0.631733273073 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135204774297 0.139662658121 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945840935979 0.266732575781 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435033442168 0.103435571967 42% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.401899644091 0.414875509568 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0464620448242 0.0530846634433 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189032994359 0.40443939384 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390941243538 0.0528353158467 74% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 4.45695364238 224% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.26048565121 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.49668874172 143% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.62251655629 138% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.1766004415 94% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.2958057395 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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