Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no shortage of debate about the fact that the ability to manage a group of people is essential for any collective undertaking to be successful. Without proper coordination or objectives issued from a certain individual, many teams works or group activities might yield nothing but chaos. In my view, although like many other innate talents leadership skills come naturally, they can indeed be learned and developed in a person from an early age. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, a great deal of information from the accounts of writers about distinguished leaders and their own autobiographies unearth the fact that they have been taught crucial lessons by their mentors, instructors, parents or some significant events during the course of their lives. For instance, by reading the brilliant history book" history of civilizations" written by the renowned author Willam Durant I was informed a lot about the Napoleon Bonaparte, the Emperor of France from 1805-1812. In addition to being a military genius, whose victories on the battlefield are still discussed in military academies, he was an awesome leader. Through sheer determination and intelligence, he seized power in a turbulent period of the history of France and united his people. According to Napoleon himself, there were many occasions that altered his life which assisted him to transform into a famous figure. His mother as he notes, was especially influential on him, giving him confidence and a capability to give commands effectively. Besides, the time he spent in the artillery training school learned many things on how to lead his men in a battle.
Secondly, the deciding factors which determine whether one is able to lead others are quite known to scientists. To be more specific, it is agreed upon that self-esteem having adequate communications skills, being firm in face of problems and making timely decisions are among qualities necessary for an effective control of subordinates. My father's experience is a good example of this. Being asked to be in charge of a team of writers to cover an election campaign in his newspaper, he had to cooperate with a number of different colleagues. At first, since he was not feeling that he deserved this post, things were not going well for the team. Seeing this opportunity, members tried to disrupt the work whenever possible. As a result of this, after evaluating the situation my father decided to be firm and stand strong on his ideas. The result was fantastic, everyone fell in line while making that special coverage the best for many years to come.
In sum, I hold the view that leadership is possible to be understood and learned. Not only are numerous prominent leaders' lives indicate this, but also features of a capable leader are well known and possible to promote in a person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for instance, i feel, in addition, as a result, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 10.4613686534 268% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 22.412803532 192% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 30.3222958057 247% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2423.0 1373.03311258 176% => OK
No of words: 479.0 270.72406181 177% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05845511482 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.04702891845 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89173668056 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 289.0 145.348785872 199% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603340292276 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 765.0 419.366225166 182% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 2.5761589404 466% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7483849887 49.2860985944 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.380952381 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8095238095 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95238095238 7.06452816374 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 4.33554083885 346% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131098496919 0.272083759551 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035950481068 0.0996497079465 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337944412836 0.0662205650399 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822862937773 0.162205337803 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257844543443 0.0443174109184 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 63.6247240618 214% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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