north pole
The article states that Robert E. Peary reached the North Pole on April 7, 1909, and provides three reasons to support this; however, the lecturer refutes this idea by providing several counter example.
Firstly, the writer asserts that National Geographic Society investigation revealed that Peary’s record was consistent and persuasive to support Peary’s claim that he had arrived the North pole. However, the speaker disagrees with this point by saying that even though the National Geographic Committee did an investigation was not completely objective. 14 reason that many members of this Society were actually Peary's friends and some of them funded his trip. also, the professor stated that the investigation had lasted for only 2 days and according to Peary’s statement they did not examine all his evidence. consequently, the professor concludes that the National Geographic Society investigation is not trustworthy and did not prove that Perry indeed reached the North Pole.
Secondly, the reading claims that are recent explanation was done by a spoiler name Tom Avery provides support for Perry's claim he reached the North Pole in only 37 days. On the other hand, professor refutes this point by explaining the difference between Avery's trip and words that down by Peary. first thing Professor states that the difference between Avery trip and Perry Expedition Roar that every carrot more lighter bag Band Perry secondly every had encountered a favorable environmental condition whereas Perry had the traveled in unfavorable environmental conditions, therefore, hypothesis claim in the reading passage does not prove that Perry had arrived the North Pole in 37 days.
Finally, the reading passage claims that there was a photograph that was taken by Perry to support his claim however the professor belies this idea by stating that those photos did not prove anything since this Photograph has been taken a hundred years ago the camera use was the Fuzzy and unfocused lens. in addition to this photo became faded fuzzy and so hard to calculate the shadows of the Sun, therefore, the professor concludes that we cannot verify the accurate measurement of the shadow of the Sun in this photo so we could not compare to the position of the sun in the North Pole on April 7th, 1909. to conclude this Photograph are not confident source to rely on for the support of the Paris claim
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...iends and some of them funded his trip. also, the professor stated that the investig...
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...nly 2 days and according to Peary's statement they did not examine all his e...
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...t explanation was done by a spoiler name Tom Avery provides support for Perrys ...
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...rys trip and words that down by Peary. first thing Professor states that the differe...
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...tween Avery trip and Perry Expedition Roar that every carrot more lighter bag ...
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...rry Expedition Roar that every carrot more lighter bag Band Perry secondly every had encou...
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...condition whereas Perry had the traveled in unfavorable environmental conditions,...
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...ng passage does not prove that Perry had arrived the North Pole in 37 days. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 22.412803532 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.01324503311 279% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 1373.03311258 147% => OK
No of words: 390.0 270.72406181 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19230769231 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68078118674 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 145.348785872 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494871794872 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 625.5 419.366225166 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.4277817958 49.2860985944 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.769230769 110.228320801 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 21.698381199 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06452816374 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 4.19205298013 525% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217085181937 0.272083759551 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882952076773 0.0996497079465 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100674562669 0.0662205650399 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153341554477 0.162205337803 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042481209738 0.0443174109184 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.3589403974 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 53.8541721854 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.0289183223 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 63.6247240618 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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