The professor in lecture talks about the psychology and according to him it is the social scientific process which define the relationship between human mind and their behavior. He says that study conducted on psychology states that its a mental activity which measure how it influence to human behavior. He says that theory stated in the passage was very different and somewhat inaccurate.
First, according to professor, psychology is a mental process which affects human behavior and was affected by social, biological, and psychological factors. Also, many psychologists sought to develop how this process affects on social and human interaction. This directly contradicts what passage indicate.
Second, the professor says that psychology is subjective interaction of phenomena and knowledge, which was based on objective facts about mental behavior. In this experiment psychologists used inductive and deductive approach to describe human behavior. All this quality and quantitative data led to new theory. This was another part where experience contradicted theory.
Third, psychology's sub field based on mental and social behavior of human. Social psychology and origin of psychology is based on social science, whereas cognitive and its development is based on natural science and its application. According to him, integration of all this methods defines the mental and social behavior. This aspect was contrary to what mention in passage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...udy conducted on psychology states that its a mental activity which measure how it ...
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Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'influences'?
Suggestion: influences
... a mental activity which measure how it influence to human behavior. He says that theory ...
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Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ogical factors. Also, many psychologists sought to develop how this process affec...
^^
Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... psychology is subjective interaction of phenomena and knowledge, which was based...
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Line 7, column 271, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...n. According to him, integration of all this methods defines the mental and social b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, third, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 218.0 270.72406181 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71100917431 5.08290768461 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96491066099 2.5805825403 115% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 145.348785872 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52752293578 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 419.366225166 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7663920119 49.2860985944 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9285714286 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 21.698381199 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 7.06452816374 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239752662455 0.272083759551 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901384938019 0.0996497079465 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750730945469 0.0662205650399 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160364154377 0.162205337803 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323653145942 0.0443174109184 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.3589403974 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 53.8541721854 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 12.2367328918 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.42419426049 112% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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