Recently, the problem of wild bird injury by building glasses has been rised to the surface, so to solve this problem the author suggests three methods in the reading passage. The professor proves to his students that all these methods are not effectively stop the birds from being injured.
First, the professor clams that the using of one way glasses have a problem. this type of glasses act as a mirror and reflex the light and the images of sky and trees on it , as the bird don’t understand mirror, they start to fly toward those images because they think they are real , so that type of glasses is as bad as regular one ,may be worst. By this point the professor refutes the reading passage claiming that the bird s can see the one way glasses and distinguish them from regular glasses.
Second, the suggestion of using colorful design in building glasses is also rebuts by the lecture, because these design have to allow to the light to enter to the building, in order to do that they leave many opening in the design, which look like a hole for the birds, so the bird surely try to pass through them. to over come this problem the designer have to make the hole extremely small, that will make the building so dark, which is uncomfortable for the people living in.
The final point has been made by the professor is about the of using a magnetic field around the building to redirect the birds when they be near the building, he think this approach is unusefull in helping birds from being injured because they don’t use earth magnetic field to direst themselves along short distance , they just use this in long distance like migration in winter to warmer area, for short distance they use bare eyes. So the reading point is unpractical.
In sum, the professor explains why he is not trust any one of those approaches to prevent birds from injury. The professor has a reasonable explanation for each point and he is strongly support hid point of view.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, may, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1373.03311258 100% => OK
No of words: 302.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56622516556 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33592234246 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 145.348785872 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509933774834 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 21.2450331126 155% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.621600094 49.2860985944 253% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.222222222 110.228320801 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5555555556 21.698381199 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06452816374 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 4.19205298013 382% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172974057261 0.272083759551 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846004427853 0.0996497079465 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333415241601 0.0662205650399 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100949608627 0.162205337803 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365483816218 0.0443174109184 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.3589403974 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 53.8541721854 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 12.2367328918 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.7273730684 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.498013245 145% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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