In the passage, what we can understand is as company will be awarded with certificate by International Organization if they are able to maintain ecological standards through conservation and recycling. By this wood company would attract the consumers and make more profit. But according paragraph, author's point out some disadvantages for having certify by Organization. Firstly, Americans do not trust in the advertise.Furthermore, certify wood would be more expensive comparatively those who are not certify. As well as, product circulates within the country.
According to the audio, Prof disagree with the passage and explain some of the advantages for having certificate. First of all, all the Americans don't think the same way as mention in the paragraph instead they distinguish what sorts of wood is good or bad as well they are very aware of importance of forest. Secondly, money is not the big deal for them if the price between certify and non certify product does not have big difference. Moreover, wooden company can attract international consumers if they are able to increase the production rate and provide excellent product because people all over the world is seeking for quality product like in the USA.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 413, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ion. Firstly, Americans do not trust in the advertise.Furthermore, certify wood would be more...
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Line 1, column 427, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...Americans do not trust in the advertise.Furthermore, certify wood would be more expensive c...
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Line 1, column 509, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'certified'.
Suggestion: certified
...pensive comparatively those who are not certify. As well as, product circulates within ...
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Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...f disagree with the passage and explain some of the advantages for having certificate. Firs...
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Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'differenced'.
Suggestion: differenced
...d non certify product does not have big difference. Moreover, wooden company can attract i...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'as well as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234234234234 0.261695866417 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.162162162162 0.158904122519 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0765765765766 0.0723426182421 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0675675675676 0.0435111971325 155% => OK
Pronouns: 0.027027027027 0.0277247811725 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13963963964 0.128828473217 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0315315315315 0.0370669169778 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.1902567988 2.5805825403 124% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0135135135135 0.0208969081088 65% => OK
Particles: 0.0045045045045 0.00154638098197 291% => OK
Determiners: 0.0945945945946 0.128158765124 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0225225225225 0.0158828679856 142% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0135135135135 0.0114777025283 118% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1238.0 1645.83664459 75% => OK
No of words: 196.0 271.125827815 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.31632653061 6.08160592843 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.04852973271 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.372448979592 0.374372842146 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.341836734694 0.287516216867 119% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.209183673469 0.187439937562 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.173469387755 0.113142543107 153% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1902567988 2.5805825403 124% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.539623497131 113% => OK
Word variations: 59.3818530321 53.8517498576 110% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0529801325 69% => OK
Sentence length: 21.7777777778 21.7502111507 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2305279841 49.3711431718 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.555555556 132.220823453 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 21.7502111507 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 0.878197800319 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.09492273731 49% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.39072847682 147% => OK
Readability: 55.9614512472 50.5018328374 111% => OK
Elegance: 1.57894736842 1.90840788429 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412612143314 0.549887131256 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0914787552527 0.142949733639 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0564744400521 0.0787303798458 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.502335180897 0.631733273073 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.11653046289 0.139662658121 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188471259782 0.266732575781 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769959099276 0.103435571967 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.411971857298 0.414875509568 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0 0.0530846634433 0% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.354061366095 0.40443939384 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00267082575173 0.0528353158467 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.26048565121 23% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.1766004415 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 10.2958057395 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Not in a correct format.
The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%) but more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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