TPO-16 - Integrated Writing Task The United Kingdom (sometimes referred to as Britain) has a long and rich history of human settlement. Traces of buildings, tools, and art can be found from periods going back many thousands of years: from the Stone Age, t

Both the passage and the lecture relate to Torreya taxifoha trees which are at the risk of extinction. On the one hand, the passages mentions that researchers have found some ways to keep the trees from disappearing and gives three reasons supporting of these ways while, the lecture refutes all reasons by saying that unfortunately the ways do not provide satisfactory solutions.

First of all, the passage states that rebuilding the trees in places where include the same conditions of their first habitat. In contrast, the lecture opposes this point by pointing out those places have b affected by global warming and have become dryer and warmer than previous. In fact the trees need to survive in micro-climate.

In addition, the passage goes on to state that transporting the trees to further north parts of the country where have highly low temperature. However, the lecture emphasizes that the outcomes of moving the trees to a new environment are unpredictable. The lecture also mentions that some nonnative species spread quickly and put the native species in a danger or kill them.

Last but not least, the passage asserts that keeping the trees seed and sapling in the research center since the place provide suitable condition for growing. Conversely, the lecture disputes this point by claiming that the wild places are more satisfied for the trees since they become large and genetically diverse. So, they will be able to resist to diseases. While in the center they cannot survive to diseases in a long term because there is not enough capacity in the center that allows them to grow completely.

Votes
Average: 8 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'conversely', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'as a result', 'first of all']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.271317829457 0.261695866417 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.15503875969 0.158904122519 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0426356589147 0.0723426182421 59% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0426356589147 0.0435111971325 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.031007751938 0.0277247811725 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.139534883721 0.128828473217 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0348837209302 0.0370669169778 94% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59998909406 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0271317829457 0.0208969081088 130% => OK
Particles: 0.00387596899225 0.00154638098197 251% => OK
Determiners: 0.127906976744 0.128158765124 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0232558139535 0.0158828679856 146% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015503875969 0.0114777025283 135% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1401.0 1645.83664459 85% => OK
No of words: 230.0 271.125827815 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.09130434783 6.08160592843 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.04852973271 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.4 0.374372842146 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.304347826087 0.287516216867 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.178260869565 0.187439937562 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104347826087 0.113142543107 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59998909406 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547826086957 0.539623497131 102% => OK
Word variations: 51.8121195335 53.8517498576 96% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0529801325 77% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.7502111507 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6454614838 49.3711431718 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.1 132.220823453 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 21.7502111507 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 0.878197800319 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.39072847682 0% => OK
Readability: 53.4347826087 50.5018328374 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.94915254237 1.90840788429 102% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.47800042444 0.549887131256 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.152296524538 0.142949733639 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0787256571371 0.0787303798458 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.676876224106 0.631733273073 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135176964383 0.139662658121 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.25579861217 0.266732575781 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779889468788 0.103435571967 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.468121450271 0.414875509568 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0755425502661 0.0530846634433 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.355570732578 0.40443939384 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738736461953 0.0528353158467 140% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.26048565121 47% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.49668874172 143% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.1766004415 31% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.2958057395 78% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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