TPO 18

Essay topics:

TPO 18

The passage states that Torreya taxifoha, a type of evergreen tree once very common in the state of Florida, will soon become extinct and provides three ways to block the extinction. The lecturer, nevertheless, says that none of these ways persuasive satisfactory solution and disproves each of the author's reasons.

First, the reading claims that one way is reestablishing Torreya in the same location in which it improved for many years because of the good weather conditions. Conversely, the lecturer opposes this point by saying that this method will be unsuccessful. The professor contends that in large regions the climate will be changed more and many places will be dryer. So, this method is not a good one.

In addition, the article posits that by moving Torreya to an entirely different location where the temperature is cooler, the seed and saplings have been successfully planted and grown. On the other hand, the lecture argues that black local spreads quickly in these areas and kills many plants. According to the professor, this migration has a unpredicted outcome to the environment.

Finally, the passage expresses that preserving Torreya in research centers is another method to stop the extinction of it. Quite on the contrary, the lecturer emphasizes that Torreya can not resist the diseases in these centers. Also, we learn that Torreya needs to be large and genetically deserved to become thrived, but it has not enough capacity to be large and thus this method will be unsuccessful.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ng to the professor, this migration has a unpredicted outcome to the environment....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, if, nevertheless, so, thus, in addition, on the contrary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 246.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17073170732 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74588606409 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 145.348785872 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2190801486 49.2860985944 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 110.228320801 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06452816374 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384649328111 0.272083759551 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125288340083 0.0996497079465 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874414425551 0.0662205650399 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215465730116 0.162205337803 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339636855348 0.0443174109184 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.3589403974 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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