Reading and lecture is about the authenticity of blood vessels, red blood cells and
collagen matrix. Reading asserts that these evidences suggest that original tissue of
dinosaurs. While, lecture thinks that points made in reading are not convincing to come to that
conclusion; he gave following reasons for his opinion:
First, reading implies that when fossils of T rex were examined researchers found out
small branching hollow channels and they contain small organic substance. Therefore, reading evidenced
that might be remnants of old blood cells. In contrast, lecture suggests that organic matter in and moisture
in the bones might be due to bacterial reaction. As a consequence, he witnessed that there is no possibility for residual
blood vessels in the fossil.
Second, reading states that researchers also discovered spheres which is analogous to red blood cells.
In addition, iron content present in those fossil strengthen that possibility. In contrary, lecture thinks that those
spheres might be just reddish cells because many primitive animals lack red blood cells. As a result, the argument
about the red blood cells can not be true.
Third, reading claims that fossils contained collagen matrix in the leg bone, that solidify the statement that might be remains of T rex bone. However, lecture argues this statement made in reading, he affirms that collagen would remain active for about hundred years. In contradiction, these fossils were around 700 million years old, so that might not be collagen of T rex bone. Instead, professor put forth that scientists might shed their skin, when analyzing the fossils in that reagion and that might be the possible source of collagen. Thus, professor casts doubt on the statement made in the lecture.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...vidences suggest that original tissue of dinosaurs. While, lecture thinks that po...
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Message: Did you mean 'coming'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'convince' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: coming
...ints made in reading are not convincing to come to that conclusion; he gave following...
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...ading are not convincing to come to that conclusion; he gave following reasons fo...
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... rex were examined researchers found out small branching hollow channels and they...
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... substance. Therefore, reading evidenced that might be remnants of old blood cell...
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Message: Did you mean 'this fossil' or 'those fossils'?
Suggestion: this fossil; those fossils
.... In addition, iron content present in those fossil strengthen that possibility. In contrar...
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.... In contrary, lecture thinks that those spheres might be just reddish cells beca...
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...d blood cells. As a result, the argument about the red blood cells can not be tru...
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Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
... collagen would remain active for about hundred years. In contradiction, these fossils ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, third, thus, while, in addition, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 12.0772626932 182% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1373.03311258 110% => OK
No of words: 281.0 270.72406181 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37722419929 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57109002558 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555160142349 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.0961761709 49.2860985944 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.733333333 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06452816374 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.09492273731 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405648511811 0.272083759551 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141301669771 0.0996497079465 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874970841616 0.0662205650399 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135342805332 0.162205337803 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090141727722 0.0443174109184 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.2367328918 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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