TPO 42
The reading claims that building with window glass is very dangerous for birds and present three solutions to avoid crash of birds to buildings. However, the lecturer finds all ideas which have been mentioned by reading dubious and provides some evidences to refute them all.
At the first place, the author argues that one-way glass can protect from this accident . These glasses can help birds that understand from a solid hamper and glasses. In contrast, the lecturer brings up the idea that one-way glass works like mirror and reflects all of things. It can reflect the sky, trees etc. and birds cannot understand between fake and right sky. So they think it is real nature and try to fly right into.
Furthermore, the reading passage holds the view that designer of building can paint colorful lines on window glass. By this method, the occupied can see out and birds can understand this barrier. On the contrary, the professor dismisses this issue due to the fact that designer must make free space in their painting that people can see out. On the other hand, Birds think it is an open hole and fly right through them. For prevent this, the painting must be extremely small opening. But it change rooms to dark place and it is not suitable for people who live there.
Finally, the passage asserts that the buildings can use a magnetic field to lead birds and change their way from buildings. For birds have a compass ability and find their way by helping this sense. Conversely, the speaker underlines the fact that it is true that this ability can help them to navigate, but they just use it only in long distances. For example, when they want to migrate from cold country to warm country before winter, they use this ability as navigation. They utilize their eyes and light to find their ways in short distance such as fly one sides to other side of city. So this electromagnetic that produce signals to change a direction of birds won't have much effect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 88, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...way glass can protect from this accident . These glasses can help birds that under...
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Line 6, column 492, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'changes'?
Suggestion: changes
...must be extremely small opening. But it change rooms to dark place and it is not suita...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, so, for example, in contrast, in short, such as, it is true, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 22.412803532 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1373.03311258 119% => OK
No of words: 344.0 270.72406181 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74418604651 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25386130435 2.5805825403 87% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 145.348785872 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552325581395 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 419.366225166 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2699163308 49.2860985944 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6 110.228320801 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 21.698381199 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06452816374 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.495680764466 0.272083759551 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140414187189 0.0996497079465 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080308712437 0.0662205650399 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278418179327 0.162205337803 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475536127448 0.0443174109184 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.3589403974 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.8541721854 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.2367328918 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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