the lecture disagrees with all claims made in the article about the benefits of storing patient's medical records in electronic database instead of paper forms.
first, the reading passage claims that storing data in electronic data base will reduce costs.on the other hand ,the professor argues this point by saying that doctors who adopted this electronic records will not throw or get dispose of paper forms,they will use papers forms beside to electronic records.thus the article's first theory is not valid.
second,the lecturer refutes the idea made in the passage that illegible handwriting,improper transcription of data and nonstandard organization of paper records causes errors.she explains that even with electronic records the errors could happened because entering the data into these electronic records is done by staff members .as a result , the reading passage's second idea is refuted.
third, the author of the passage states that electronic records aids medical research .nevertheless,the lecturer opposes this point by saying that using electronic records for research is not easy as mentioned in the paragraph,because getting access to these records will district privacy laws,and for get access to these records there along procedures to follow,even then ,you will need the patient's permission and in some cases the patient may refuse to give the permission .therefor,the third point presented in the article is contradict.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, nevertheless, second, so, then, third, thus, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 219.0 270.72406181 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62100456621 5.08290768461 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98667495264 2.5805825403 116% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 21.2450331126 254% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.041124297 49.2860985944 276% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 307.75 110.228320801 279% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.75 21.698381199 252% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.5 7.06452816374 361% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 4.19205298013 549% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474859059548 0.272083759551 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.306858046517 0.0996497079465 308% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412048492836 0.0662205650399 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306858046517 0.162205337803 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412048492836 0.0443174109184 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.4 13.3589403974 243% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.21 53.8541721854 15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 5.55761589404 234% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.0289183223 231% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.2 12.2367328918 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.79 8.42419426049 128% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.7273730684 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.498013245 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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