TPO46
The reading and the lecture both discuss whether electronic records is an appropriate replacement for paper records or not. The reading says that by using electronic databases, doctors can reduce costs, reduce errors and help researchers. However, the lecture states that although using the electronic records may have some positive consequences, it has some negative effects as well.
First, the costs of storing will fall down. According to the reading, doctors can save money by applying electronic databases, because these records do not need space to storing. Moreover, they can transfer electronic databases easily. In contrast, the professor says that the doctors in addition to the electronic storing, need to keep patients records backupa; hence, the costs are going to increase automatically.
In addition, decreases errors in records. The passage states that because of bad handwriting, nonstandard papers and so forth, these causes several errors during the storing process, then by using electronic way all errors will eliminate. However, the speaker claims that almost all doctors use paper records, and it requires much time to shifting from paper to electronic records. Moreover, writing the electronic records from last paper records inherently cause some errors.
Finally, the researchers can easily achieve a source for researches by using the patients’ electronic records. The reading states that there are a great deal of electronic information that researchers are able to apply in the research process. On the other hand, the lecture refutes this advantages and says that if the researchers want to use the patients’ information, they should obtain many permits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[3]
Message: Did you mean 'to space'?
Suggestion: to space
...ases, because these records do not need space to storing. Moreover, they can transfer...
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Line 8, column 159, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'deals'?
Suggestion: deals
...e reading states that there are a great deal of electronic information that research...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, in addition, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 258.0 270.72406181 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63953488372 5.08290768461 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84312563556 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554263565891 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 419.366225166 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1154828133 49.2860985944 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 21.698381199 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06452816374 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.502024067281 0.272083759551 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177160557776 0.0996497079465 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878588890606 0.0662205650399 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300005679522 0.162205337803 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717117853153 0.0443174109184 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.3589403974 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.8541721854 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.2367328918 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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