tpo49-1
How animaulas are able to migarate long distances is still uknown for scientists. The author believes a specific kind of animal, humback whales, migrate by the help of the stars in the sky and asserts three reasons. However, the Lecturer cast doubts all reasons.
First, in contrast to the author idea that cognitive skills to use star for navigating and intelligence have correlation to each other, the lecturer thinks differently. The lecturer says there is no connection between them and ellaborate this by explaining an example. Ducks are considered as animual who have average cognitive ability, while they are not intelligent. Those cognitive skills are somehow instinct. So the idea of using stars just because of being intteligent do not make sense.
Secondly, the lecturer rejects what is says in reading about the need of sending external object or forces for orienting in a sraight direction. Also he asserts humback whales have some sort of biomagnetic ability in their brain help them sense the Earth’s magnetic,and lead them ot find their directions to migrate in a staight way.
Finally, sharks are a exceptional example of animals who do spy-hopping but do not migerate. Sharks just do spy-hopping to look for their prey. Therefore, the professor claims the use of spy-hopping as a reason for navigating is a pure speculation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...s for orienting in a sraight direction. Also he asserts humback whales have some sor...
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Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...elp them sense the Earth's magnetic,and lead them ot find their directions to m...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n a staight way. Finally, sharks are a exceptional example of animals who do s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, in contrast, kind of, sort of, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 22.412803532 49% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 219.0 270.72406181 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19634703196 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88486197936 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62100456621 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.423859467 49.2860985944 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5384615385 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06452816374 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271689349352 0.272083759551 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791558388898 0.0996497079465 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456203735854 0.0662205650399 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140418679075 0.162205337803 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230609156872 0.0443174109184 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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