Write a letter to a travel agent expressing your dissatisfaction with their facilities due to a problem you had on a holiday.
Dear Mr. Green,
I am writing to complain about the day trip to Cairo I have recently gone on with your company. I traveled on 1st of October and I was shocked by the standard of food, safety and comfort.
To begin with, the food was very unsatisfactory. Although your advertisement promises a lunch at a five-star restaurant with gourmet food, the food was in fact of a very poor standard. Also, no dinner was arranged. Instead, we were told that we can eat at our hotel restaurant upon arrival. No food was provided after lunch we had at 1PM until 10.30PM. And when we arrived at the hotel restaurant none of the staff were aware of such arrangement and the restaurant was closed. Fortunately, they managed to prepare some meal from leftovers.
What is more, the bus driver did not follow safety rules. For instance, he was on the phone most of the time while driving and drove at very high speed even in narrow alleys.
To make matters worse, the AC could not be turned off and no blanket was available on the bus. The next day I caught cold and could not enjoy the rest of my holiday.
I feel, I am entitled to a full refund and a written apology for the misinformation contained in your advertisement. I hope to hear from you regarding this matter as soon as possible.
Regards,
Balzhan Issakhanova
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, regarding, so, while, for instance, i feel, in fact, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60337552743 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66174838869 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628691983122 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.109188716 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1875 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8125 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0901363189835 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0275357103962 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314797521943 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0514987359655 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420106135288 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.