The given graph shows the nitrogen oxide emissions produced by four vehicles

Essay topics:

The given graph shows the nitrogen oxide emissions produced by four vehicles.

The given line graph illustrates the 4 vehicles (diesel car, petrol car, lorries, and buses) manufacture nitrogen oxide emissions.

Overall it is clear from the graph, buses produced highest nitrogen oxide emissions, where, the lowest nitrogen oxide emissions is produced by diesel car.

According to the line graph, 40 g/km is produced at the speed of 10 kph for buses. But from there, nitrogen oxide emissions started to decline continually to around a quarter (25) g/km at the speed of 60 kph. After this, it started to increase consistently and made just over 42 g/km which is highest at the speed of 130 kph. For lorries, just under 35 g/km is manufactured at 10 kph then it continually decline until a fifth (20) g/km at 80 kph. Then it, jump up minimally to 25 g/km at 130 kph.

For diesel car, nitrogen oxide emissions is used at lowest speed. The minority 5 g/km is produced at 10 kph and it remain stable until at the highest speed of 130 kph. At last, petrol car produced 10 g/km at the speed of 10 kph and remain same until 110 kph but then it started to rise slowly and produced 12 g/km at 130 kph.

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Average: 7.4 (78 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'produced the highest'.
Suggestion: produced the highest
...erall it is clear from the graph, buses produced highest nitrogen oxide emissions, where, the lo...
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Line 5, column 403, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'declines'?
Suggestion: declines
...ufactured at 10 kph then it continually decline until a fifth 20 g/km at 80 kph. Then i...
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Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'remains'?
Suggestion: remains
...ity 5 g/km is produced at 10 kph and it remain stable until at the highest speed of 13...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49261083744 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42914590673 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433497536946 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.681003548 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186564147243 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11184182675 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115793351893 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188812007827 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12137127238 0.0819641961636 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 61.2550243902 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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