Youu applied for and paid to attend a series of three work related seminar due to begin next week. unfortunately you have just received news that your father has been taken ill suddenly and you will have to return home to Hong Kong to see him. you are disappointed as the seminar would have been very helpful to your career and you were looking forward to attending.
write a letter to the owner of the hotel. in your letter
advise them of your inability to attend express your disappointment and apologies
ask you can attend the seminar was at the later date
if there are no more seminar this year ask for
Dear sir,
I am Anna George, a pharmacist at JCW hospital and a member of your team as well. 3 days medication seminar is going to be held in my area from your management where I have applied for and paid the required entry fees.
I am inscribing this missive to inform you that today I got a call from my homeland that the health of my father is not going well as he is suffering from diabetes. He is in critical condition therefore I have to go there at any cost. I am very disappointed as this seminar is very crucial for me for my assessment in internship. However looking after my father is more important for me. I apologise for my absence.
I would be able to attend seminar next week. I will probably come back within a month, my returning date from Hong kong is 26 December. On the top of it, there if there is no possibility for me of attending the seminar then I would appreciate if you could please refund my fee as promised in the guidelines.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Anna George.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ld be able to attend seminar next week. I will probably come back within a month,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, then, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.296875 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59688565481 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2134333509 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203650037778 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741641975418 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431710546441 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130839197917 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325840114615 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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