some people believe that after child enters School their teachers influence more than the parents to what extent do you agree or disagree
Child age is very crucial period of one's life as it is free from world's tensions and also called learning age. Some asserts that when a child get into school than they more follow their teachers rather than parents. Certainly i am totally agree with the statement as a child spend more time at school in his /her learning stage.
To commence with, children get easily influenced with things around us along with people of the society where they live. No doubt, parents influence their child in many ways. Some kids consider their parents as their role models. Parents are the first teacher of a child who give education regarding moral values, relations, society and so on. Parents taught child the difference between what is right or wrong, good or bad for them. For instance, at the age of four or five a kid knows the difference between his/her loved ones such as relatives, siblings, friends, family and neighbours along with society mates.
However, a teacher is considered as 'god' in one's life. Children get more influenced by them as they are studying new things at school. They start learning the things which are useful in their healthy future from their tutor. If a teacher is behaving well with students then obviously the kid would follow the teacher and try to behave same as them. Teacher is responsible for a child minds growth in positivity. A child also follow the appearance of a his/her teacher along with its influence. For example, a four year old girl starts teaching her aged friends same as her teacher did. Took her mother's clothes and get into it. This is the influence of teacher on her. Kids also follow the instructions of their teachers at. Just as, if their teacher said that eating candies in school is a bad habit then the child definitely avoid to eat candies at home and this is what called influence.
To conclude, although, parents also influence their child in different ways but a child get more influenced from their teachers behaviour and appearance along with the things which they taught them
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Child age is very crucial period of ones life as it is free from worlds tensions...
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... a child get into school than they more follow their teachers rather than parent...
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Suggestion: agreed
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...art learning the things which are useful in their healthy future from their tutor...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid eating'.
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...s a bad habit then the child definitely avoid to eat candies at home and this is what called...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, then, well, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80736543909 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36178748186 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507082152975 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2312769955 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8095238095 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8095238095 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300594232432 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103974042495 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072543785109 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214198414752 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022165921613 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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