The pie charts below show exports from various EU countries to India and China in 2000 and 2011

Essay topics:

The pie charts below show exports from various EU countries to India and China in 2000 and 2011

The pie charts give information about the proportions of exports from different countries in the EU to both India and China in the year 2005 and 2015.
Overall, Germany was generally considered the dominant exporter in both years. However, the United Kingdom exported a larger percentage of goods to India in 2005.
In India, the exports of the UK accounted for nearly a third (29%) compared to 25% of Belgium in 2005. In the following 10 years, these figures experienced a slight drop to 13% for the former and 20% for the latter. The value of exports from Germany increased noticeably from 15% to 25%, which made it the leading exporting market. There was a stable trend at only 2% in Finland, and the proportions for the remaining countries saw a slow rise.
In comparison, the majority of the exports to China came from Germany, which made up 38% in 2005 and then went up steadily by 10% ten years later. Austria and Belgium maintained their exports at 2% and 5% respectively. While there was a marginal increase of just 1% from Netherlands and Spain, the figures for the rest showed downward trends.

Votes
Average: 8 (15 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, then, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63849765258 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56106621375 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544600938967 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.1302831803 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.8 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283162130819 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115875906567 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911322600548 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198174313011 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101401402055 0.0819641961636 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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