organic food consuming
Nowadays, many people are concerned about one’s health, especially food safety issues. Organic food is believed to have a better impact on a person's well-being and not cause harm to people due to its ecological nature. However, organic food has both advantages and disadvantages.
One major advantage is they are clean and healthy because they have fewer chemicals and pesticides sprayed on them. Also, organic food is more nutritious because they get their nutrient straight from organic dirt. In addition, farmers use eco-friendly farming methods to make organic food, organic farming can keep the farmland healthy, and chemical abstinence preserves the ecosystem.
While it is easy to see the benefits of consuming organic food, we must also recognize some disadvantages. First, producing organic food costs a lot of time and effort, so they are more expensive than non-organic food. Because of the higher price, many financially struggling people or families cannot afford organic food. Second, organic food is seasonal, difficult to find, so it is not always available for everyone.
In conclusion, there are both advantages and disadvantages to the consumption organic food. Hopefully, many of the disadvantages of organic food will be successfully removed through biology and technology’s development, research.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.0286738351 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 43.0788530466 23% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 52.1666666667 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 201.0 407.700716846 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61691542289 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9836563795 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636815920398 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0678160675 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.0833333333 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.575053036245 0.236089414692 244% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.23102950502 0.076458572812 302% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101044487922 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.351102130134 0.150856017488 233% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112394194028 0.0645574589148 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 58.1214874552 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 10.9000537634 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.6 Out of 6.0
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