Do you think that school newspaper should be given absolute free speech with no censorship from faculty advisors?

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Do you think that school newspaper should be given absolute free speech with no censorship from faculty advisors?

Nowadays, censorship is spreading in our education system. Most of the students must submit the news to the school officials before publish it to other people because the school officials feel that they have an authority to censor their school newspaper. On the contrary, I have a different opinion from them. School newspaper should be freed from faculty advisors intervention because school newspaper could evaluate school system, should stand independently, and teach a student about creativity.

We must acknowledge that school newspaper should be freed from any disruption because it could assist school evaluation. I remember when my friend became a newspaper editor in his school. His faculty advisors supported him to write anything about the school. He said, "I could write anything here, such as school incidents or student critic to help developing my school." Moreover, his headmaster could evaluate the school principle from student critic and revises it immediately.

It is a necessity that school newspaper should be clear from some interventions because it should stand in a liberal position. Last week, my sister told me about her school newspaper. She could read the weekly news every week. Furthermore, she enjoys the content of the news because of its originality in writing. Her school has a principle that creativity of student's handmade should be independent.

Also, school newspaper should be cleared from faculty member intervention because it should teach the students about fluently idea. I feel confused when my teacher said, "we must fight for freedom of creativity in this modern world." However, our schools Highness always stand in the school newspaper blockade.Then, they call the newspaper editor to change those prohibited news to the nice school facility or school achievement.

In my conclusion, school newspaper should be freed from faculty advisors intervention because school newspaper could help the school systems. School newspaper should stand in liberal, and school newspaper should teach the student about creativity of writing. However, there are some disadvantages if the school gives a freedom of speech in the school newspaper absolutely, such as inappropriate of the news language. I think it was back to us, about how we implemented and acted about it in this modern era of the world.

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