Have you traveled recently It so could you write us a review of the hotel you stayed in Include information on the room service and prices and say whether you would recommend the hotel to other people

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Have you traveled recently? It so, could you write us a review of the hotel you stayed in? Include information on the room, service and prices and say whether you would recommend the hotel to other people.

On our trip last year, I spent 3 days at the Yasaka’s hotel with my family. The hotel is located along the Nha Trang beach. It is an old building but well renovated into a 5-star hotel.

The first thing to talk about is the services. The staff was very welcoming and helpful. I requested for an early check-in, it was approved. I requested for a late check-out, it was approved also. They even advised my family on what to do, where to eat in the city. Coffee and tea are available 24 hours. There was also a manager’s reception with free foods and drinks every evening which I really enjoy.

Concerning the quality of the room, it was well-decorated with lots of colorful paintings and very comfortable. It has all the essential items like TV, sofa sleeper, fridge… and a huge glass window to bring the natural light to the room.

For those luxurious amenities, you may expect to pay a lot, but the price here is affordable compared to others.

I truly loved my experience with this hotel and would definitely recommend you to give it a try!

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Average: 5.8 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, really, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61578947368 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67671295506 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678947368421 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3195797225 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.6428571429 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.5714285714 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141449487512 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408571134841 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626336784754 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094788174524 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789562479874 0.056905535591 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.0946893788 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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