Have you traveled recently? It so, could you write us a review of the hotel you stayed in? Include information on the room, service and prices and say whether you would recommend the hotel to other people.

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Have you traveled recently? It so, could you write us a review of the hotel you stayed in? Include information on the room, service and prices and say whether you would recommend the hotel to other people.

On our trip last year, I spent 3 days at the Yasaka’s hotel with my family. The hotel is located along the Nha Trang beach. It is an old building but well renovated into a 5-star hotel.

The first thing to talk about is the services. The staff was very welcoming and helpful. I requested for an early check-in, it was approved. I requested for a late check-out, it was approved as well. They even advised my family on what to do, where to eat in the city. Coffee and tea were available 24 hours. There was also a manager’s reception with free foods and drinks every evening which I really enjoyed.

The first thing to talk about is the services. The staff was very welcoming and helpful. I requested for an early check-in, it was approved. I requested for a late check-out, it was approved as well. They even advised my family on what to do, where to eat in the city. Coffee and tea were available 24 hours. There was also a manager’s reception with free foods and drinks every evening which I really enjoyed.

You may expect to pay a lot for those luxurious amenities, but the price here is affordable compared to others.

I truly loved my experience with this hotel and would definitely recommend you to give it a try!

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, really, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54666666667 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6196823858 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7448346913 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.8421052632 106.682146367 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8421052632 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.05263157895 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0897884485456 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0277425372253 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574262132908 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885908487471 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847261140982 0.056905535591 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 13.0946893788 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.3001002004 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.22 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.15 8.58950901804 72% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 78.4519038076 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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