Many young people leaving school think that going to university will give them higher wages, superior career prospects and greater job satisfaction. However, they would do better to get a job and start earning as soon as possible.Do you agree or disagree?

Job satisfaction means having euphoria feeling about job. If a person having interest her/his job and enjoyed it, we say he
or she has job satisfaction.
Some of the experts believe that job satisfaction is an inner factor. Actually it is a type of emotional adjustment, it means if
a job makes pleasure moments for person he or she satisfied her or his job. But some of the expert believe that it is not
only a cause of satisfaction actually there are a set of different causes that male satisfaction feeling.
There are five dimensions about any job, this five dimension are important properties of job:
1- same job: it is include range of tasks that do it employees.
2- salary
3- access to a real opportunities for promotion.
4- colleges
5- boss
Result of the researches have shown us in recent years among of the Asian, European and American countries, there is most
satisfaction job in the Switzerland and it is of self confidence and power risk and job security in workplace. Most of the
change job happening in the India.
In our country conclude from the reports and statistics that, job satisfaction have not been review and analysis yet.Some of
the experts say useful work daily in our country is about half an hour!!

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81944444444 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82487465884 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578703703704 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.336227581 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.1 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.38176352705 297% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152829438407 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700359781627 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465309609187 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681112831369 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562684046424 0.056905535591 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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