Motivation Letter
My interest in business education stems from years ago when my father as a businessman let me as a 10 years old girl play a role in his decision making process.
I worked during my study years. I have managed a team in Research and Development Department of a well-known company in Iran called Pars Data and currently I’m the Marketing supervisor at Asanegar Company. In addition I have taken apart in two human resources projects (TMS that stands for talent management system and standardization) for Khoshgavar Company which is the agency of Coca-Cola in Iran.
I have also a strong academic background. As a top student in bachelor degree I had the chance to continue my education in master degree without entrance exam; so I had a opportunity to follow my dream and now I’m about to graduate with a Master's degree in Business Administration from PNU university in Tehran.
Furthermore I’m so interested in new controversial management topics, as a consequence I wrote 2 articles about neromarketing and e-commerce. Beside that I formulated a strategic plan for Asanegar which boost up their performance. Working as a software architecture made me to think in creative way, analyzing applications and considering any possibilities.
I suppose that I could be a valuable asset. After reviewing my CV, I hope that you realize that I am well qualified so I look forward to discussing my qualifications by email at asdf@gmail.com .
Thank you so much for your time.
Best,
Sahar Pahlevani
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.984 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.857 4.6
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.14 0.07
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