The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies than on positive developments is harm to the individuals and the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Media play a significant role in strengthening the democracy of any country and media provide information to the common people, thereby people become aware. However, It has been noticed that media have more predilection towards problems and emergencies than positive development. Thus, I partially accord with this statement.
Nowadays, people have engrossed completely in technology as a result they make themselves knowledgeable by updating themselves with every news of the world. But, there may be certain complications for the people owing to negative news. Firstly, news act as a daily source of information for someone therefore if someone is getting news regarding problem then such news may shape the mentality of an individual in a drastic way, which later brings huge problem for them. Secondly, many news are tempered by adding negative things for drawing public attention, consequently one gets incomplete knowledge, which is partly alarming. For instance, many channels show various criminal activities on account which many people learn myriad ways of committing crime.
However, media can be considered as the bridge between government and the people, and hence media should have an absolute freedom to show any news due to manifold reasons. Firstly, media make people aware about the problems as well as good things which happen around, hence helpful for the people to be meticulous. Secondly, many times natural calamities occur in various part of the world, at that time media acts a boon because media spread news all over the world, correspondingly, people come forward to help victims.
In conclusion, I opine that the bedrock of media is dependent on freedom, liberty and so on, thus all types of news are partly helpful for the people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: much; little
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: much news; a good deal of news
...ings a huge problem for them. Secondly, many news temper by adding negative things for dr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28518518519 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71849076583 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2330306425 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151156132187 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058320530508 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629978181227 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986849824215 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372644391074 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.33 Out of 6
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