1.Artificially intelligent robots are increasingly taking human jobs . some people believe that eventually all works will be done by robots while others believe that there will be a limit to the task that robots can performChoose which position you most a

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1. Artificially intelligent robots are increasingly taking human jobs . some people believe that eventually all works will be done by robots while others believe that there will be a limit to the task that robots can perform
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.

Human jobs are being taken by artificial intelligent robots day by day gigantically. There are people who believe that entire work will be done by robots in future rapidly, however, others believe that there will be still some work that need to be accomplished by mankind. This essay will discuss why robots will be able to replace human in everyday tasks.

In future, artificial intelligent robots are likely to perform all sorts of jobs that are being done by mankind. Machines are being more and more advanced and are being used in various organisations as a replacement of human. For instance, robots are already being used in large banks in Japan to greet and navigate the customers and their queries. Thus, I am convinced that eventually, robots will do all the tasks in place of human being.

On the other hand, there are some people who do not agree that robots will be all in all to complete the task without the help of human. In the event of technical failure, robots are not able to perform their task as per pre-programmed manner and human might need to be used as a backup resource. Therefore, presence of human is still essential to perform some tasks.

In conclusion, in my opinion, robots will displace human and perform all the tasks accurately .I believe scientists will develop smarter and more intelligent robots as per time’s need who can perform the assignments effectively. Consequently, there won’t be any job left for human being.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'robots'' or 'robot's'?
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Suggestion: In the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 10.5418719212 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.912 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68984460518 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472 0.580463131201 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6569625028 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.544572620292 0.242375264174 225% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.221841975953 0.0925447433944 240% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111601089671 0.071462118173 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.371234833356 0.151781067708 245% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903990632326 0.0609392437508 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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