1. Do you think consumer should avoid over packed products or it is responsibility of producer to avoid extra packaging of products?" Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.
Over packaging of the products has been the epicenter of discussion in multiple forums and a conclusive unanimous agreement is yet to achieved. Different distinguished individuals have expressed their views in favor and against the very idea of over packaging of the products through multiple modes of communication, be it main stream or be it the social media. I will try to enunciate below in essay of mine that, which is responsible for over packaging.
One of the most prominent reasons why producers are responsible for over packing of the product is that because they need to ship the items from one country to another country. Moreover, if producers will do not secure the product with heavy packaging there are chances that the product might get damaged and this can lead to big loss for the owner. In addition,for the safety reasons producers are doing the over packaging.
On the other hand, consumers are also responsible for over packaging. Nowadays, everyone wants to shop from supermarkets because people do not want to go several shops to buy their daily needs items, when they go to supermarket everything is on one stop and easily available everything. Furthermore, this is the most common reason for extra packaging.
While on the other hand, there are people who will continue to wrangling about the fact of over packaging of the products. However, we cannot be oblivious to the fact that who is responsible for the over packed items. In view of the larger benefits offered by good packaging. I would like to conclude that both are responsible for the over packaging as producers need to secure their product and consumers want to collect everything at the best and one place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
...his can lead to big loss for the owner. Furthermore to this, for the safety reasons produce...
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Suggestion:
..., when they go to supermarket everything is on one stop and easily available ever...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t common reason for extra packaging. While on the other hand there are people who ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 31.9359605911 163% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95486111111 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75786045166 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534722222222 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7169516236 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.769230769 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226248786541 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888107980669 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046758349261 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146141496605 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529242407898 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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