Age discrimination occurs when a decision is made on the basis of a person’s age. In the workplace, these are most often decisions about being employed in the first place, winning promotions or being unfairly dismissed. Should discrimination against older workers be made illegal?
It is an undenial fact that discrimination is still prevailed in the workplace on the basis of age although it has myriad of negative impacts on an individual .There are multiferious drawbacks of discrimination which I will be discussing in the essay below and I strongly agree that it should be made illigal consequently they would have a lot of advantages in their personal and professional life.
The first and foremost effect of biasness towards an older individual is nothing but causing emotional stress and throwing varios mental problems such as anxiety, fear, low-esteem and low confidence,etcetera. Secondly, such unwanted practice pushed the group to the deep networking of financial hardships if he/she loses the job being a victim of intimidation and discrimination. For instance, elderlies may not be able to pay their mortgagare on time alongwith other expenditures such as water, gas, electricity and internet billls so on. Therefore, if discrimination is made illigial , nobody will dare to perform such practice on the workplace , consequently, older people can spend their life smoothly enjoying quality of life.
However, there are some people on the other side of the fence who are not in favour of making it illigal . Those people think that the elderly may not perform as effective as a young employee can work by both physical and mental point of view. For instance, a 60 year's old person may not be able to lift as heavy load as a 30 year's old can. Therefore , they believe the productivity would be low.
To recapitulate, the elderly should not be discriminated because of their age as they rather complete the task more effectively than the younger one because of their holistic experience .Thus , the positive aspects outweigh the negative one .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13541666667 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03780341712 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600694444444 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.0255458649 50.4703680194 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.9 104.977214359 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 20.9669160288 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184245494235 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632838454468 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058257856532 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115706448992 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500947152883 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 12.6369458128 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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