Age discrimination occurs when a decision is made on the basis of a person’s age. In the workplace, these are most often decisions about being employed in the first place, winning promotions or being unfairly dismissed. Should discrimination against older workers be made illegal?
Often discrimination happens on the basis of color, caste, sex etc., but age discrimination generally happens in the workplace or somewhere else. Moreover, age discrimination against older people should be made illegal.
Firstly, there is no age bar for learning, similarly, being bias against the person's age is not acceptable. That particular person is also contributing his sweat in the task and should be treated equally with other employees or members working in the same position. If in a marketing company, a person who works in the middle management as a manager should be treated fairly as the manager in another department. As a result, there shouldn't be additional benefits given to a handicapped or an elderly person.
Secondly, if you are providing some company benefits to an individual then the liquidity of that company might get hampered. Furthermore, there would be lethargy among the existing employees and eventually, the company would suffer a huge loss. If, for instance, a MNC provides monthly pension and bonus to an elderly person, then the contribution of that person towards the company would not be efficient as it should be. There should be utmost discipline in the functioning and the rules of a workplace.
Sometimes this might not be the case but mostly discrimination occurs on the basis of a person's age. In my opinion, all people should be treated equally where it is important and not on lame decisions
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11814345992 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97895076521 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561181434599 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5541413814 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.083333333 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.25397266985 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371715686421 0.242375264174 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146899637892 0.0925447433944 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983516764819 0.071462118173 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244787083768 0.151781067708 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869669249339 0.0609392437508 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.