Alcoholic buy alcohol legally. Should general stores legally sell alcohol? Give your opinion.
Nowadays, alcohol is available throughout the world and the government has set up special shops for buying the liquor. Many alcoholics are debating that alcohol should be available in the general stores as well, whereas opponents disregard this notion and believe it is not beneficial for the society. In my opinion, alcohol should not be sold in general shops. This essay will illustrate both sides of arguments and thus lead to a conclusion.
To commence with, consumption of alcohol is predominant in the modern society which has created a widespread worry across the government and residents. The government has planned and selected various avenues for selling and buying liquor and other beverages, while these places are generally outside of residential areas to stop the nuisance, alcoholics are demanding for the availability of alcohol in general stores. Not only it creates issues and disturbance in the community but also influences young kids to start drinking early. For example, a study conducted by Harvard University suggests that 20% of adults prefer nearby shops to buy alcohol.
In addition to that, general stores are used by families and under-aged kids for shopping groceries and other household items. Opening or legalising general stores for selling liquor will promote drinking habits
among the residents. Besides that, availability and ease of access can aggravate the consumption.
In conclusion, as per the statements aforementioned, one can conclude that selling liquor and other alcoholic drinks should be restricted to specific government-approved places and legalising general store will create a nuisance.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, thus, well, whereas, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54761904762 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97274933339 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587301587302 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5853146524 50.4703680194 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.25397266985 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371976850892 0.242375264174 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141856496153 0.0925447433944 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113355928421 0.071462118173 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189177980751 0.151781067708 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122496054038 0.0609392437508 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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