Any recent invention that you think proved beneficial or determined to society.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in recent invention of mobiles phones or internet. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments is in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one in that mobiles phones or internet mostly use in human life can not only contribute to human life fully depend on this things. But also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefits more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience needless, to say all these merits stand one is good stead, as far arguments their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas, Besides, only when one follows such a systems, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility dedication or a perseverance hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of my opinion internet is very useful, internet use in every field like in study, government work and so on. According to my perception internet mostly use students because books and library generation is go, now generation is grow, every schools and collages study to internet its very interesting.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of mobiles phones and internet its part of life is indeed too great to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: these
...ontribute to human life fully depend on this things. But also lead to numerous other...
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...as, Besides, only when one follows such a systems, can they broaden their horizons, thus ...
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... it is apparent why many are in favor of my opinion internet is very useful, inte...
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...because books and library generation is go, now generation is grow, every schools ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87162162162 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7636952296 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557432432432 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.283837745 50.4703680194 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.2 104.977214359 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 20.9669160288 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0168614097256 0.242375264174 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00991575972469 0.0925447433944 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297472791741 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0131828197788 0.151781067708 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228333136439 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.1260098522 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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