Any recent invention that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society?
one of the most conspicuous trends of todays world is a colossal upsurge in any recent invention is televissionis a colossal upsurge in ones life.There is widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in ones life.However,I do not entirely accept this and i will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance.The most preponderant one is that most famous invention can not only contribute to inventing new technology ,but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields,not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective,but they can also enhance the productivity and convenience.Needless to say,all these merits stand one is good stead,as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas.Besides,only when one follows such a system ,canthey broaden their horizons,thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility,dedication and perseverance.Hence,it is apparent why many are in favour of new descovery .
In view of arguments outlined above,one can conclude that the benefits of technology or invention are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 201.0 242.827586207 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40298507463 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.74468548027 2.71678728327 138% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.5024630542 244% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.376183943 50.4703680194 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 271.5 104.977214359 259% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.25 20.9669160288 240% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.25397266985 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.33497536946 431% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0656040675881 0.242375264174 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400328742116 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266137834393 0.071462118173 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0400328742116 0.151781067708 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266137834393 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.1 12.6369458128 230% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.81 53.1260098522 7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.2 10.9458128079 230% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.93 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.14 8.32886699507 134% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.94827586207 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.3980295567 212% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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