Belching and unauthorised behaviour is unacceptable in modern offices How far you support this view Give your response with justification

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Belching and unauthorised behaviour is unacceptable in modern offices. How far you support this view? Give your response with justification.

Proffessionalism is essential in modern workplace as it fosters respect, cooperation and effective communication among colleagues. Employers should encourage proffessionalism and should arrange trainings or activities which leads to team work and unity among colleagues. Belching and unauthorised behavior disrupt workflow, decrease productivity and create tension among coworkers, which leads to toxic environment and can create mental pressure towords employees. In result of belching and unauthorised behavior most employees lose interest in working such environment and can easily opt for better options.
Employers have legal and ethical responsibility to provide a safe and respectful workplace, free from disruptive behaivor. Implementing training on workplace etiquette and enforcing clear guidelines and consequences can matigate instance of belching and unauthorised conduct. They should never encourage back bitting habits and should take strict actions against such unhealthy habits. Strict punishments and heavy fines should apply on crossing the provided guidelines.
I Strongly believe that upholding professionallism in the workplace is crucial for fostering a positive work environment and ensuring organizational success and any belching and unauthorised behaviour should not be tolerated by any employee or employer.

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Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 8.36945812808 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 20.9802955665 19% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 31.9359605911 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 182.0 242.827586207 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.35164835165 5.00649968141 127% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.92707691288 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33497926598 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67032967033 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8846759561 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.444444444 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 7.25397266985 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0939607622864 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376487148166 0.0925447433944 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295350832431 0.071462118173 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652425314351 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115382489002 0.0609392437508 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 12.6369458128 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 53.1260098522 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.55 11.5310837438 170% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.31 8.32886699507 136% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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