The belching and unauthorized behavior unacceptable in modern offices. how far do you support give your response with justification.

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The belching and unauthorized behavior unacceptable in modern offices. how far do you support give your response with justification.

One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is colossal upsurge in unauthorized and belching behavior is unacceptable in modern offices. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are number of arguments is in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one in that in office today every person in discipline can not only contribute to any type of misbehaves not accept in modern offices. But also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefits more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience needless, to say all these merits stand one is good stead, as far arguments their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a systems, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility dedication or a perseverance hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of my response but officers in interview pay attention to the same thing so every person prepare in and every person work in discipline.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of belching and unauthorized behavior not accept in offices are indeed too great to ignore.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95555555556 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86001717071 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.207224087 50.4703680194 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.8 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130701409553 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522053179584 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070923137457 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848988790085 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449742000836 0.0609392437508 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.1260098522 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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