In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?

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In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?

Recently, the phenomenon of using credit cards and omitting the cash has sparked a heated debate. Although many people subscribe to the view that it may bring many demerits to the society, I am inclined to highly believe that its benefits outweigh its cons.

First, purchasing merchandises cards can make the purchase process faster. This may attribute to the fact that cashless society may help buyers to transfer the price of goods in less than a minute. For example, based on my own experience I bought a car which was expensive but I paid the cost by credit card rapidly. Hence, avoiding cash in trades surely increase the pace of them.

Apart from this, debit cards and credit cards provide a safe procedure for business. This is to say that using cards which have exclusive passwords prevents any robbery and fraud. For instance, a recent study conducted by Colombia university reveals that credit cards rise the security of trades up to 69 percent. Therefore, the cashless economy is an aid to develop a secure transaction system.

To conclude, suffice to say that cashless society is a highly contentious issue giving rise to strong emotion in both sides of the debate, and some disadvantages can be considered for financial cards such as computer difficulties and losing the passwords, but the positive points of operating cards are more than its negative points.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, so, therefore, apart from, for example, for instance, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00869565217 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62394096019 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64347826087 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.4796393596 50.4703680194 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.727272727 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183921121214 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619687520078 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431534570968 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102326734753 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336162601472 0.0609392437508 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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