Recently, the phenomenon of the cashless society and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that using more credit cards cannot be highly beneficial, such an issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that using less cash can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support purchase by credit cards. At first, the advantage of buying by cash is easy to pay for the cheap products that often need to pay coins for them. However, purchase by cash has many disadvantages. For example, the necessity of a big wallet to keep money, which needs to tolerate the weight of the wallet.
In addition, people may forget the password of credit card during their shopping that is a disadvantage of virtual money. But, people can benefit the credit card by online shopping and etc.... For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2018 has shown that a significant number of people use their credit cards in online shopping that help them to purchase their products on the web sites in their houses and also save their time.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this topic, I profoundly believe that the benefits of credit cards far outweighed their drawbacks.
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also, but, first, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03448275862 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76210717181 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594827586207 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0455730047 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.181818182 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.25397266985 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228749185465 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759201456729 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441109785486 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112683857009 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450416824167 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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