In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this practice?
The importance of the credit cards which was always been debatable has now upsurge a lot of arguments in favor and against it, Thus it has become ever more controversial. The substantial influence of imitating celebrates has sparked controversy over the potential of this trend is an integral part of society in recent years. It can be agreed that the upside of imitating celebrities are instrumental indeed .this essay will be elaborate on both assertions and provided a well weighted conclusion.
There are myriad of reason which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from fact that credit cards is secured with password and pin code. Another pivotal aspect that this argument is that online payments is possible and there are no risk of carrying cash which leads to lesser chances of theft and damage. Needless to say all these merits stand credit cards in a good stead.
However there are some pitfalls that negate this argument and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but the most alarming is that…..beside… Hence it is apparent why many are against credit cards.
According to the arguments aforementioned above one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of credit cards are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, the potential drawback should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, look, nevertheless, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23041474654 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8843656285 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608294930876 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7771450225 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.111111111 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132283852231 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051710080621 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338670323577 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816743465366 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340503417037 0.0609392437508 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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