In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
Recently, the phenomenon of replacing credit cards instead of cash and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of using cash is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both positive and constructive by a substantial number of individuals. In this essay, I am going to discuss the pros an cons of using credit cards instead of cash throughout this essay.
From the social standpoint, the benefits of using credit cards can provide a society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that facilitate money transportation as well as payments, are inextricably bound out. According to my personal experiments, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered that people embraced using credit cards because they can transfer money more easily beside they did not require to carry a lot of money for shopping. Thus, the beneficial consequences of credit cards such as easy money transfer and convenient shopping condition apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of financial issues, credit cards might have some negative consequences. Moreover, the fundamental aspects of spending money related to this reality that the demerits of credit cards pertain to easy payments. As a tangible example, a scientific research has been undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downsides of using credit cards are correlated negatively with easy money transfer and payment. Hence, it is correct to presume that credit cards lead to having lack of financial management and out of control expenditures.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, the benefits of credit cards far outweigh its drawbacks. the advantages such as easy money transferring and paying in the modern world are required significantly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41780821918 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99460796473 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582191780822 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7227967337 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.833333333 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177490068646 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676704122194 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332346924276 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105241645069 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292844223118 0.0609392437508 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 55.0591133005 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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