In cities and towns in all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of the this and What action can be taken to solve this problem ?
Nowadays, day by day increasing population rates in the world which is very big riddle. That is why, there are increasing high volume of traffic in big towns and urban areas. So, I will discuss the reasons of that problems and that solutions.
First of all, no doubt, the population is one of the most significant reason where people are facing many problems today, one of those probelms is high volume of traffic in the major cities. First, in the major cities there are lot of facilities for all people so that more and more people move to big cities from rural areas as well as small towns. Moreover, in the faster world each person have two or more than two vehicals who live in the major cities so they can move one to another place with minimal time period. Second, the most importance thing is that people never follow the traffic rules and regulations which is actual required for overcoming the traffic jam as well as accidents.
On the other side, a coin has two sides, where people face such that problems, also there are some solutions too. Firstly, people should use more and more public transport and each person should have only one private vehicle. Furthermore, government should regulate on those companies which produce more number of vehicles in the market. Secondly, definitely, it is true that when traffic rules can be followed accurately by all people, not only reducing the traffic problems but also accidents and others problems.
In conclusion, in the major cities, increasing population make the traffic issues and people can solve that issues for taking some actions.
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...all towns. Moreover, in the faster world each person have two or more than two ve...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 5.94088669951 252% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88644688645 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38399917765 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549450549451 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 418.5 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6312867428 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.166666667 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9166666667 7.25397266985 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178796613141 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690374660524 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583749680945 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108896756145 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297261912773 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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