Recently, the phenomenon of the changes in communication during the last 10 years, and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that this change cannot be highly beneficial, such an issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that advancements in communication can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support the new communication ways. At first, the recent communication facilities such as social networks could reduce the physical communications and send people far away from each other. However, the speed of data transferring could be enhanced by the new communication instruments. for example, bt the Internet the speed of telecommunication has greatly risen.
In addition, the social networks can make children less communicative. But, the changes that have taken place in communication made the relationships among people easier all around the world. for instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2016 has shown that a significant number of people are using new technologies in their mobile phones as a simple of communication.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that the benefits of new ways of communication far outweighed its drawbacks.
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but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54545454545 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42777908003 2.71678728327 126% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627272727273 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1749583232 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.909090909 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172091356534 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624777559891 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549169628097 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912356976886 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424426246258 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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